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By: Cameron

                Our class went to the O.E.C. to study wetlands.   I am Cameron.  Tyler and Roman are my friends.  While we were there we noticed that Adrienne, Tyra and Zoey were stepping on the muddy, mossy, bog.  The sides of the wetlands were starting to erode.  That is bad because animals live there and the rats, mice, and little fish homes were  getting destroyed.   All of us looked at each other, “are you thinking what I am thinking,” I secretly wisped,”    yes we are Roman & Tyler,” miserly whispered.  We shod pout sine’s up that the OEC is going to say that the OEC might be closing.

Ranger  michelle said “I am sorry but I can’t do anything about it.” I said,  “Can we try to fix it,” ranger michelle whispered, “You all try can,” Ranger micelle said. So we got on it right that second by pouting sine’s up.  And that day everything changed because all the animals came back, all of the kids are not stepping in the Muckey, Mossy, Bog any more.

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